http://kouriko.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kouriko.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-06-23 04:05 am (UTC)

♥!

My heart just melted reading this. I love your writing style so much. It's so emotional and beautiful~ /gushes It's so easy to connect with the characters here. ^^

I love the contrast between the two sections, too. The leave, and the return.

Green chokes out a sob because he's waited three years, seven months, and nineteen days, and finally - finally, they had managed to escape that snow.

So lovely. I'm memming this! Amazing job.

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