FFUUUUUU I DO NOT KNOW ENGLISH. *fixes peek* It's been a while since I've mixed homophones, and in my defense, peak/peek are not frequently used words and I never mix then/than or two/to/too fff
You're right! I think that does read better, so I'll change it. :D I think I chose that wording because I'm really heavily influenced by random crap for no reason, and I was thinking of the song Come Back to Me - especially the chorus: "I'll let you go, I'll set you free / and when you see what you need to see / and when you find you, come back to me." It makes me a little like askdjfas;lkj ;~; REEEDDD. GREEEEEEEN.
I... like long sentences. *really has no excuse for that* I don't even know what to do with the purple prose. *pokes it* I'll come back later and look at it again.
Like two days ago, I told elystia that I hadn't properly written angst in a while, she was all like, ">.> You better not write it for Green/Red; they have enough angst as it is" so LOL IDK EVERYTHING I WRITE ABOUT THEM IS GOING TO BE KITCHY S-SOB. I like the ending to the first part more than the second, I couldn't just leave Green to suffer so. I guess I could've been like, "AND THEN THEY HAD MANY HAPPY TIMES ON THEIR BED THAT DAY ;D" LOL *is a terrible person*
THANK YOUUUUU *luffs on you*
also I can't proofread and need more sleep so fail grammar w/e
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and I never mix then/than or two/to/too fffYou're right! I think that does read better, so I'll change it. :D I think I chose that wording because I'm really heavily influenced by random crap for no reason, and I was thinking of the song Come Back to Me - especially the chorus: "I'll let you go, I'll set you free / and when you see what you need to see / and when you find you, come back to me." It makes me a little like askdjfas;lkj ;~; REEEDDD. GREEEEEEEN.
I... like long sentences. *really has no excuse for that* I don't even know what to do with the purple prose. *pokes it* I'll come back later and look at it again.
Like two days ago, I told
THANK YOUUUUU *luffs on you*
also I can't proofread and need more sleep so fail grammar w/e