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/人◕‿‿◕人\ ([personal profile] koyuki) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-07-12 07:16 am (UTC)

Re: I am sorry my comments are so long but I can't stop fangirling

Okay, after editing this for hours, I added a few more lines into the story and pretty much a whole paragraph and a half at the end. I think this should better tie things together, but also leave a bit of room for interpretation.

I screened my other comment to you because I don't want people reading my, uh, insanity. ^^;;

And short of typos, I'm really not going to edit this anymore. >.o I started writing this story on June 4th. I'm ready to be done with it. Hope it makes a bit more sense now. :) Thanks for being a soundboard.

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