Okay, after editing this for hours, I added a few more lines into the story and pretty much a whole paragraph and a half at the end. I think this should better tie things together, but also leave a bit of room for interpretation.
I screened my other comment to you because I don't want people reading my, uh, insanity. ^^;;
And short of typos, I'm really not going to edit this anymore. >.o I started writing this story on June 4th. I'm ready to be done with it. Hope it makes a bit more sense now. :) Thanks for being a soundboard.
Re: I am sorry my comments are so long but I can't stop fangirling
I screened my other comment to you because I don't want people reading my, uh, insanity. ^^;;
And short of typos, I'm really not going to edit this anymore. >.o I started writing this story on June 4th. I'm ready to be done with it. Hope it makes a bit more sense now. :) Thanks for being a soundboard.