http://wordsnatcher.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] wordsnatcher.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-07-12 08:15 am (UTC)

... i don't even know what to say

i am partly awed by how good the writing is (no srsly), party tearing up from the cute moments, partly confused, and partly afraid for green's sanity. D| it almost seems like he has some kind of early onset alzheimers at certain parts of this fic, but then you bring up the "false memories" thing and i'm all like "WHAT OMG"
while this fic is sweet and clever and beautifully written, it's also kind of freaky in a psychological mindfuck kind of way. i don't know if that's what you're going for, but... i definitely got the shivers once or twice while reading. :x

i adore leaf's role in this, and i love the part with red & green as kids, and, and... yeah. i'll stop rambling now. I'M SO GLAD I STAYED UP LATE AND GOT TO READ THIS <333

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