http://russsel.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] russsel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-08-31 06:59 am (UTC)

The ending is so gorgeous.

I definitely had a hard time trying to catch up but in the end, I started to follow.

I love how there's not much dialogue, but when someone says something, the emotions are powerful.

Your writing is so pleasant to read. I love how everything just flows and the sentences are simple. You manage to create an entire atmosphere without needing to use big, confusing words and complicated structure, which is always nice.

And what gorgeous lines, but this one has to be my favorite:

It's just him standing in the center point of white emptiness, stretching to infinity in every direction, with Red waiting for him at one end of that forever.

Amazing. ♥

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