I'm glad you followed! It my head, the order of the scenes made sense, but I lost a few people on it.

I actually think that big words tend to distract from atmosphere! It tends to get convoluted and difficult to read and follow. There's probably irony in that since I tend to use complicated words in my every day speech. XD; I have... unusual speech patterns.

I'm glad that line came across well! That's one of my favourites too. Even before this fic really took shape and I was just writing the first scene, I wanted to convey the idea of an uncrossable distance and Green being frustrated by that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing~