http://kouriko.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kouriko.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-07-16 03:12 am (UTC)

First I just have to say...

omg Growlithe puppies~! I was so excited for that. fnajgfsjfnd. xDD Picturing Green, Eevee and Growlithe puppies gives me seriously warm, happy thoughts.

And now for a slightly more coherent response...

These were so good!

I really liked the connection you wrote with Silver and Green. I've never really thought how similar the two were until reading this! It was really intense, and suspenseful. I could see them sharing a lot of similar experiences in their pasts.

"Then you should take me out to dinner again," Red says and pulls his cap over his eyes, his face turning bright red.

That scene was so adorable. I love that that's one of the first things he actually says to Green.

Great job. ^^

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