*files your betaing critiques for later when I'm editing*
1) It was intentional. My beta corrected it too, but I wanted it to be more like a bunch of thoughts running into each other. Stylistic thing. Not exactly correct, but half of my syntax isn't, clearly. XD
Now that you mention that about assuredly, it bothers me too so I'll have to pick another word. I didn't even think of the connotation.
chuuni has rather successfully brainwashed me into Silver/Kotone, but I think they're cute as well. XD They'd be all grumpy at/with each other all the time. I think their dynamics particularly works well because even on a non-superficial level, they have a lot of things in common.
You can just imagine that after Green ~saves~ Silver, that he takes Silver come and makes sure Silver lives life in the straight and narrow... ^~ figuratively of course. I've read too many of those types of fics apparently and now it's rotted my brain.
2) I'm convinced Green would make a terrible nurse. He'd be the best technically, but he'd have the worst bedside manner ever. Eevee will be there to keep him in line, of course.
3) There's probably some irony to the fact that Green doesn't want kids, but is willing raise a houseful of Pokemon. XD He does it out of love, of course, because if you think about battle factories and their perfect IV Pokemon, like, statistically, there would be a lot Pokemon that would get shoved aside in the process because of inferior genetics. So Green works hard so that no Pokemon will ever feel unloved. ;_;
....gah will finish replying later I gotta go grocery shopping.
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1) It was intentional. My beta corrected it too, but I wanted it to be more like a bunch of thoughts running into each other. Stylistic thing. Not exactly correct, but half of my syntax isn't, clearly. XD
Now that you mention that about assuredly, it bothers me too so I'll have to pick another word. I didn't even think of the connotation.
You can just imagine that after Green ~saves~ Silver, that he takes Silver come and makes sure Silver lives life in the straight and narrow... ^~ figuratively of course.
I've read too many of those types of fics apparently and now it's rotted my brain.2) I'm convinced Green would make a terrible nurse. He'd be the best technically, but he'd have the worst bedside manner ever. Eevee will be there to keep him in line, of course.
3) There's probably some irony to the fact that Green doesn't want kids, but is willing raise a houseful of Pokemon. XD He does it out of love, of course, because if you think about battle factories and their perfect IV Pokemon, like, statistically, there would be a lot Pokemon that would get shoved aside in the process because of inferior genetics. So Green works hard so that no Pokemon will ever feel unloved. ;_;
....gah will finish replying later I gotta go grocery shopping.