http://kouse.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kouse.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-08-02 08:41 pm (UTC)

The content of your stories are all quite touching and cute.
I especially liked the last two. They seem to be well interpreted.
The only thing I think you could watch out for is grammar and several syntax and sentence structure.

Otherwise, all in all, it's a sweet batch 8D
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