http://kouriko.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kouriko.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-07-27 05:24 am (UTC)

I hope my comment makes sense. Orz I've been working all day... xD I will try to be as coherent as possible!


Daww. I really loved this. ♥ It broke my heart. ;-; I could totally relate, too... Not wanting to end up in the same sort of... brokenness as your parents weighs down and hinders relationships a lot. Ffff. You wrote that aspect really well.

I think it's really interesting how you wrote Green's father connected with Red's mother (and I've always loved the name Akane). And the Leaf scene was cute. Haha.

(Because love doesn't erode. Because nothing has to change.)

I loved this. ♥ It was very beautifully written.

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