Then, Red leaves.

NOT EVEN KIDDING, I REELED BACK IN MY CHAIR SO HARD I NEARLY FELL OVER. Good job.

Tying in the old nursery rhyme was brilliant ♥

Only concrit: And even though the more he pulls, the harder Green pushes, but he still refuses to give up. -- Can you take out the two words after "and?"

This broke my heart about twenty million times. Wonderful job. You're really good at that whole bittersweet thing. I LOVE YOUR WRITING SFM ♥