http://kouriko.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kouriko.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-08-31 03:23 pm (UTC)

Saving a spot for me with a Qmi icon? ♥ ♥ ;--------------;

I loved this fic! dbhaufbhds. I am trying to find a way to express my love for this fic without spamming you. nfajknfdsj.

Poor Hikari. ;-; She just wanted Jun's attention, and her struggle to get that was so heartbreaking, but sweet. I could so picture this happening. The poor girl wanted to follow him everywhere, but he would always just bolt away.

Hikari has small dreams for a small-town girl, and most of them revolve around her best friend.

♥ I love the repetition of "small-town girl" in these few paragraphs.

And when she keeps trying to reach him and he won't pick up... nnnghh And then he's in the crowd...;----;

This was really touching. ♥ Thank you for writing it! And I adore the ending. It's so cuteeee.

I'M MEMMING IT FOREVER. ♥

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