ext_276146: (Little Wargle demands an explination)
Bay ([identity profile] bay115.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] southofreality 2010-10-07 06:45 am (UTC)

Quite like this a lot. Great job putting Dawn's thoughts on the people she encountered and also I like the last part a lot.

Cyrus part though I think you could expand slightly more, though, like have a short dialogue of the two. Maybe it's just me though wanting to see a bit of Cyrus and Dawn's interaction being shown, though (and no, not a CyrusxDawn shipper :x). XD
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