This fic has a certain unique charm that just makes you really enjoy it (: While I don't feel completely satisfied because I felt you could have expanded on Hikari's relations with each character even more, the shortness of each part kind of corresponds to how quickly her heart changes, and that's what I actually like about this.

You were able to capture her thoughts/relationship with the person in a few lines, so that's cool (: I especially liked 'And even if Dawn is a little too old, too wise, and too pragmatic for that now, she can still feel her heart skip a beat when he smiles.' haha, very cute!