Oh man, what a dark twist on the world of Pokémon! I loved it, really and truly, and I teared up something awful at the end. :'(
I loved how you wrote it; the italicized dialogue without the quotation marks made it seem as if this was a story about a story, or perhaps a memory or a dream. That's just the vibe I got. x3
Is Silver okay? is the first thing he asks, and Lyra’s chest tightens a little with an emotion she doesn’t recognize. Please take care of him, now that I can’t. /sob That line got to me. ;_;
Also, the ending was fantastic. :D I'll be thinking about this one for a while to come, haha. Great job here!
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I loved how you wrote it; the italicized dialogue without the quotation marks made it seem as if this was a story about a story, or perhaps a memory or a dream. That's just the vibe I got. x3
Is Silver okay? is the first thing he asks, and Lyra’s chest tightens a little with an emotion she doesn’t recognize. Please take care of him, now that I can’t.
/sob That line got to me. ;_;
Also, the ending was fantastic. :D I'll be thinking about this one for a while to come, haha. Great job here!