The A/E one is so cute. So cute. Why has it taken you this long to write for that pairing, bb, you're good at it!
Did you fix para 2? I don't see any tense problems now. I can give you other nitpicky things if you want, but not now ._.
The premise of this fluff was clever and very endearing, and I love the small text ;; bb you are so good at writing fluff, this is why you should write less angst and come over to our side and write fluff all day and spread sparkles and love everywhere. Idk.
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Did you fix para 2? I don't see any tense problems now. I can give you other nitpicky things if you want, but not now ._.
The premise of this fluff was clever and very endearing, and I love the small text ;; bb you are so good at writing fluff, this is why you should write less angst and come over to our side and write fluff all day and spread sparkles and love everywhere. Idk.