I've been lurking your Originalshipping for the past few days now and I'd like you to know how thoroughly disgusted I am with the anons who completely tore apart your writing with unprecedented evidence and absolute idiocy.
This is actually comparable to some of the well-known fanfiction I've seen around. It has a wonderful, angsty plot line, it's characterization and interpretation is spot-on, and overall, it has a style I will never forget. I actually loved the confusion you put into this, it was strong willed and easy to connect with. The way Green was reacting sounded so real. Usually death!fics are like "BAW THEY'RE DEAD AND WE ALL GO CRY NOW", but hell you really developed Green during the process of the first two parts. Even though it was obvious Red was dead, the readers still wanted that ending. And it was perfectly placed. It seemed like Green didn't know at all, and if those dumbass anons actually took the time to connect with the interpretation, they would have probably understood that you added that element to provide how shocked Green must have become.
I was seriously looking forward to the third part and now I'm upset I may not get it. For whatever reason you're gone, I'm sorry. But I've been on a rampage against the people who criticized your work for a while. There are enough bad Pokemon fanfiction for them to rag on. This one is one of the actually interesting and intriguing ones that, sure has a few grammatical mistakes (but who doesn't have those, really), but at the same times holds that texture and emotion that no one else would be able to portray. A lot of us are with you. I'm actually speaking for myself and about three other friends who've lurked your story for a while now. I know strength doesn't come in numbers, but strength may come in belief. And I truly believe that the evidence you presented in the other post clearly discredited the uncouth anons who sound extremely similar and extremely trolly.
I hope it doesn't get to you. ): Come back soon?
P.S. This doesn't even explain half of my rage and proof that you're awesome. But this will suffice and I'll tell you more later perhaps.
Seconding previous comment
This is actually comparable to some of the well-known fanfiction I've seen around. It has a wonderful, angsty plot line, it's characterization and interpretation is spot-on, and overall, it has a style I will never forget. I actually loved the confusion you put into this, it was strong willed and easy to connect with. The way Green was reacting sounded so real. Usually death!fics are like "BAW THEY'RE DEAD AND WE ALL GO CRY NOW", but hell you really developed Green during the process of the first two parts. Even though it was obvious Red was dead, the readers still wanted that ending. And it was perfectly placed. It seemed like Green didn't know at all, and if those dumbass anons actually took the time to connect with the interpretation, they would have probably understood that you added that element to provide how shocked Green must have become.
I was seriously looking forward to the third part and now I'm upset I may not get it. For whatever reason you're gone, I'm sorry. But I've been on a rampage against the people who criticized your work for a while. There are enough bad Pokemon fanfiction for them to rag on. This one is one of the actually interesting and intriguing ones that, sure has a few grammatical mistakes (but who doesn't have those, really), but at the same times holds that texture and emotion that no one else would be able to portray. A lot of us are with you. I'm actually speaking for myself and about three other friends who've lurked your story for a while now. I know strength doesn't come in numbers, but strength may come in belief. And I truly believe that the evidence you presented in the other post clearly discredited the uncouth anons who sound extremely similar and extremely trolly.
I hope it doesn't get to you. ): Come back soon?
P.S. This doesn't even explain half of my rage and proof that you're awesome. But this will suffice and I'll tell you more later perhaps.